Zoukeau's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[mgr shitpost]

Ah Christ, haha

[Yoshi's Kangaroo]

That thing did look kind of weird, come to think of it. Cool adaptation!

[Joker Commission]

I like this crazy, almost feral design. However I start to feel like you maybe overdo the blocky effect in some of your recent work? In this drawing it's quite literally everywhere.

[Smiling Haters]

I like this a lot, how you've twisted all the in your own way so you could squish them altogether in a nice composition. However the outlines around the blue part make this a bit harder to read for me.

[Zoya's really fun to draw]

Huh, I think your style is evolving, these lines feel a lot stronger. Keep it up!

[Zero - MMZ]

I like the colours in this a lot, the scratches in the armour are very cool. The perspective works well on the bottom half of the image, but it feels off to me at the top half. I reckon his right shoulder (our left) should be higher and the other lower. It just doesn't feel like we're looking up enough. Did you use perspective lines?

[COMMISSION - Candleholder]

Hehe freaky, wonderful expression. Why not colour the whole thing?

Stradomyre responds:

The commission was just for the fire to be colored :P

[Hoenn Lizard]

Haha this is great. I do remember being kind of weirded out when my grovyle evolved, many years back. Thank you for drawing and sharing this freaky creature x)

[Celia]

I like the shading and the expression in this a whole lot, but the fingers freak me out a little bit x)

HallowGazer responds:

Assuming it's mostly the hand on her hip?
I don't disagree, I definitely need more practise with hand-poses.

[Nadya II]

I think it'd help if the hips were more angled, and if the spine was curved a bit more too. I like detail you put in the jacket, the little sharp bits are cool.

Can't help but feel like her face needs something extra, but I'm not quite sure what... Maybe the hair is actually taking attention away from it?

HallowGazer responds:

I appreciate the input ^^

Not sure what "something extra" would be either, though.
Are you thinking about some design-detail, like a scar, jewelry or make-up?
Or rather a technical improvement, like more detailed eyes?